Sunday, September 18, 2011

Notes on a betrayal

A white silk blouse, ripped
flutters to the floor gasping
exposed, now she's done ~
Eva is little-death quiet
dressed in ruined roses
Branded by his burning kisses for years...

S.

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25 comments:

  1. The last line resonates with me... love it.

    ~laurie

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  2. Hey - thanks for your comment on my blog! I was thinking you might like this other blog I write for sometimes - - its an erotica blog. http://theshamelessblog.blogspot.com

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  3. yep, laurie, damn those hot kisses that last years

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  4. girl scout, hi. I may take a look.

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  5. What beautiful sentiments. Enjoyed each verse.

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  6. Hello my friend! Always nice to come back to read your beautiful article. Very understandable , simple and elegant. I wish a excellent new week for you, with very smiles and peace! Visit me too. Greetings from Rio de Janeiro/Brasil.

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  7. very sensual indeed, somewhere the word scarlet came to my mind while reading this .

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  8. You are painting such a vivid picture for me. I have the score, I have the cinematography all laid out. I watch the movie over and over, seeing something new each time.

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  9. Gives me goosebumps, as always, darling.

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  10. Hey Gyanban - O. scarlet - hmmm. Ty for your
    perceptive comments.

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  11. W&W, O. pray tell, what is the score to this
    little tryst? TY

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  12. Cammila, hey you - TY for the pop in.

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  13. Hola, llegué hasta tu espacio a través de un blog amigo en común, me pareció muy bueno, voy a quedarme por aquí como seguidor, si me permites.
    Si tienes ganas (no lo tomes como un compromiso), te invito a pasar por el mío.
    Un saludo desde Argentina.
    Humberto.

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  14. Hola Humberto ~ me encantaria tenerle como
    miembro de mi blog.

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