tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post6632457834266316638..comments2023-09-28T03:15:36.496-07:00Comments on Crinkled Dress: 3 AMShaunahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-6920620378299706102011-08-14T08:48:03.513-07:002011-08-14T08:48:03.513-07:00and I like your energy Deepa, please return.and I like your energy Deepa, please return.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-51702344642829753772011-08-14T01:29:55.617-07:002011-08-14T01:29:55.617-07:00yo !
read a lot of your posts .... awesome .... ...yo ! <br /><br />read a lot of your posts .... awesome .... i like your choice of words in a verse. <br /><br />keep writing !Deepahttp://deepasayz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-1765848952637637902011-08-12T17:43:42.874-07:002011-08-12T17:43:42.874-07:00Camilla - Ty.Camilla - Ty.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-15203479681947296862011-08-12T10:32:54.210-07:002011-08-12T10:32:54.210-07:00Very weighty words, baby. I think I'll be thin...Very weighty words, baby. I think I'll be thinking about them for a while.Cammilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14789861707977033486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-55547047389188664352011-08-12T09:29:34.584-07:002011-08-12T09:29:34.584-07:00sheilagh lee, hey there you.sheilagh lee, hey there you.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-66992065625799942522011-08-12T09:29:13.353-07:002011-08-12T09:29:13.353-07:00laurie, I'm so in love with the harp.laurie, I'm so in love with the harp.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-728627392237872232011-08-11T20:08:38.648-07:002011-08-11T20:08:38.648-07:00wonderful poemwonderful poemSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-63875364639892251882011-08-11T18:23:37.525-07:002011-08-11T18:23:37.525-07:00Beautiful. I especially like:
lyrical as a pliant...Beautiful. I especially like:<br /><br />lyrical as a pliant harp <br />trembling uncertain notes into a certain Heavenlaurie kolphttp://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-2896591089458271372011-08-11T09:42:44.639-07:002011-08-11T09:42:44.639-07:00jaerose - hey sweet, yep- you said it perfectly
a ...jaerose - hey sweet, yep- you said it perfectly<br />a phone can bring freedom and pleasure.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-57768407467157166782011-08-11T09:41:49.887-07:002011-08-11T09:41:49.887-07:00luvlymish - cool penname. Ty. for the critique.luvlymish - cool penname. Ty. for the critique.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-7145085977751427742011-08-11T05:43:18.527-07:002011-08-11T05:43:18.527-07:00'night's indifference'..brilliant..a p...'night's indifference'..brilliant..a phone brings much freedom..and pleasure..if you're lucky..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-15532318046581058792011-08-11T04:03:32.182-07:002011-08-11T04:03:32.182-07:00I really love the first sections of this piece. In...I really love the first sections of this piece. In fact I really love the whole poem - I'm not sure about the 'radiates' section though I know it was one of the three words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-20442257559970560222011-08-10T16:15:15.410-07:002011-08-10T16:15:15.410-07:00I know Bethe. I'm determined to let the pass
...I know Bethe. I'm determined to let the pass<br />stay in the past.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-59448453100013502122011-08-10T16:11:06.075-07:002011-08-10T16:11:06.075-07:00Heaven -Ty. please return.Heaven -Ty. please return.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-84043164791567180502011-08-10T16:05:57.327-07:002011-08-10T16:05:57.327-07:00It is strange how we hold onto voices phones and a...It is strange how we hold onto voices phones and all those that burn into our souls<br />BlessingsBethe77https://www.blogger.com/profile/07908965956063875893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-33983364590120838582011-08-10T15:58:15.254-07:002011-08-10T15:58:15.254-07:00Nice blog... I like your erotic poetry ~Nice blog... I like your erotic poetry ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-52701690538279729642011-08-10T15:52:50.326-07:002011-08-10T15:52:50.326-07:00I was so addicted. TY,Dreama, my sleep just has to...I was so addicted. TY,Dreama, my sleep just has to<br />improve soon - hoping.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3368384606422005575.post-87195106677983066752011-08-10T15:42:03.553-07:002011-08-10T15:42:03.553-07:00We humans are a strange lot.
How we can become add...We humans are a strange lot.<br />How we can become addicted to someones voice. I know because I used to be, too.<br />This prose is sad, gentle, lovely.<br />Re your comment to me, I hope you get some decent sleep, soon. ;)Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.com