Monday, May 2, 2011

Tanka

Cleanse a heart
and knead an aching soul
melt all resistance
Show mercy to the foolish
And relish each other's spirit.




Shauna

11 comments:

  1. Super !!

    I loved the last line .. 'relish' each others' spirit

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  2. hey Deepa, thanks a bunch.

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  3. Or at least try ... I wonder which would be the most challenging to do?.... Charming piece:)

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  4. Beautiful Shauna!! Glad to know you :) Thank you for your kind comment xxx Hope you're having an inspiring weekend :) Eabha Rose

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  5. Very inspired, Eabha Rose. Thanks.

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  6. Dear Rose,I think mercy is often hard to give-
    not sure why. Thank you.

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  7. I particularly admire 'knead an aching soul'

    partly because my doughy soul is in desperate

    need of a good old kneading.

    Bless*

    Mark

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  8. Hey, NietzscheO. - join the club.
    A good and gentle soul kneading is
    a wonderful thing.

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