Saturday, September 10, 2011

Like Summer Rain

this summer, trimmed in your kisses, sewn up in your love
I gave a thought to reeducate myself on the sorrows love can bring
but failing that class, I became a student of love's addictive magic

you said I've thrown you off kilter, attacked by vertigo each time you pass
an open window and want to call my name, dizzy in the sound of me on your lips
our nights shine as day and day murders all doubts

in my magical, imaginary house we make love in each room
set standards that go deep into the earth like kids digging to china
I eat poppies and you eat my lovesick eyes...
 let this unending summer of rain and love baptize us
once and for all

i love you.

Shuana


18 comments:

  1. Ahhh...oO.ooooo :} I'm a romantic fool,
    so sue me, but the line forms at the rear.

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  2. I think it is a sweet and passionate letter...

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  3. this is beautiful!
    and thanks so much for visting and the lovely words you have left ...

    <3

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  4. your blog is my all time favorite

    <3

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  5. Heaven: TY. heavenly girl.

    Morning: O. Ty & good morning.

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  6. Ty LouLou, adorable pen name.


    O. Belle, Ty. I continue to enjoy your blog.

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  7. I'm in love with this pink cursive font! Also, a tremendous love poem :)

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  8. Summer love! Awwe yes! One can be swept away in the summer rain of love! You took me there. Beautifully written.
    Blessings

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  9. welcome Ben. I know so stoked by the pink cursive myself :} TY. pop in again.

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  10. hey Bethe, oh yeah - summer luvin' is all good,
    esp. when it last into the following months :}TY.

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  11. Beautiful, passionate letter, wonderful, descriptive language. I am looking forward to reading through the rest of your blog!

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  12. Fabulously addictive dear Shauna:D

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  13. O. Jacque. TY - hope you like & return.

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  14. Sweet Rose, I love when you talk addictive. Ty.

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  15. Really beautiful and romantic, all of it...some really great lines...I love the flow of this one.

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