Wednesday, November 23, 2011

bound at club Amnesia

       Hollowed out by the club lights,
  My hidden misery, an indulgent need, is made known tonight.
  No shallow caresses, his wings strike across my wrists
  Bind us to an ancient covenant.
S.

19 comments:

  1. Very seductive!Two people finding solcae in one another. I like it!
    Happy Thanksgiving
    Blessings

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  2. Dearest Beth - you always glean the positive
    aspect of human relations in my poetry Ty

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  3. "Hollowed out by the club lights," - I think that is suxh a good and descriptive line. I enjoyed this. :-)

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  4. Hmmm sounds ominous~! Sexy but ...Dangerous to know. ;)

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  5. hey Susannah, that's how everyone looks at the
    club under those crazy, sexy blue lights. TY.

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  6. Dreamer2 - uh huh...I find that to much such
    at high, at times. TY

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  7. A mysterious ending... great use of the words.

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  8. Great use of the prompts loved this.

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  9. hey Sheilagh, TY. Your poetry sings.

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  10. Deeply erotic and evocative!
    A brilliant poem :)

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  11. and those are the qualities I yearn to inhabit.
    TY Ygraine.

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  12. You must be fun to see at the Club ;)

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  13. hey Ben, no, I haven't read my poetyr during
    "open mic" yet.

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  14. This gives me a bit of a chill. I can't help thinking I know the feeling.

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  15. HEY SHAUNA,
    ONCE AGAIN A TRULY BEAUTIFULLY WORDED POST. :)
    I HAVE POSTED AN AWARD FOR YOU OVER ON MY PAGE, IF YOU HAVE CHANCE HOP OVER AND COLLECT. :)
    EVE.X

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  16. hey Eve. a huge TY for thinking of my blog
    and giving me this award.

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