I'm getting geekier in my old-er age.
I like it!Blessings
The first line might be one of the most interesting things I've ever read. Nice work!
I too like the first line...great poem!
Very unusual and, highly creative. Lovely!
O lala, your poem reads like deliciouslymaddening foreplay.
Yes, this is an entrancing piece..offering up little clues to guide us through the story..delicious..as always..Jae
tY, Beth...hey Ben, TY
hey Susie, TY....beautiful Dreamer, ty
hey sweet lips, Ty paige.....lovely, jaerose, ty
Never ending love, but also never really sure ... lovely words to ponder about. Thanks for stopping by my blog, S. ...Love, cat.
hey Cat, Ty, for the provocative words.