Friday, September 30, 2011

3am senryu

he spares me no mercy, his tongue writes poems
on my spine...limbs melt in his mouth      ~ S.

22 comments:

  1. hi shauna
    =)

    yeah, the universe has kinda sorta been spoiling me lately. its quite the experience......

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  2. Love this...his tongue writes poems on my spine....such few words drawing a very sensual picture...

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  3. Deliciously sensual senryu :)

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  4. Ygraine, yes only - this is waiting for you.

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  5. Beautiful, provocative, a great post!

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  6. hey Ben, TY, you are a sweetie.

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  7. Reminds me of that song "Mercy" by Duffy. Oh how I understand that song, and this poem.

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  8. Hey W&W - yeah ... I'm getting that you do get this poem - this bonbon taken with no mercy

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  9. after reading some of your posts. I just admire how you make me feel and imagine things. Very good use of words, not to mention few words... I love it!

    JJRod'z

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  10. hey JJ - cool to know you enjoyed your visit
    here - Ty supreme compliment to make someone
    feel with my words - please return.

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  11. Great imagery, painting with words.

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  12. Ahha !

    Makes you imagine ... brings up images !

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  13. oh yeah Deepa, marinate in those images :]

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