Thursday, September 15, 2011

O.

   
I'm bent over backwards with a
supernatural ease, the omission of  my verbal consent unrecognized.
My hips rise and fall, glittery curtains, moist at the
hem from the coming storm.

S.

18 comments:

  1. Wonderful allusion to hips as curtains!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Great use of the 3WW words... and very evocative.

    ~laurie

    ReplyDelete
  3. Oooo, I like this one!

    Great use of three words. Here is my attempt.

    ReplyDelete
  4. laurie - how are you? TY.

    ......


    alice - TY!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Ha. This is the second I have read with these words. Opposed. They are opposed. How wonderful that we can take three words and create opposite worlds. This was vivid and scantily clad ;)

    ReplyDelete
  6. hey WW. yep, words call up all sorts of
    different ideas/poetry in different people. Ty

    ReplyDelete
  7. Like this very much, It's meanings are deep


    Melanie

    ReplyDelete