I'm bent over backwards with a
supernatural ease, the omission of my verbal consent unrecognized.
My hips rise and fall, glittery curtains, moist at the
hem from the coming storm.
My hips rise and fall, glittery curtains, moist at the
hem from the coming storm.
S.
Hmmm....exotic imagery
ReplyDeleteWonderful allusion to hips as curtains!
ReplyDeleteWOW,that's so cool!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the 3WW words... and very evocative.
ReplyDelete~laurie
Oooo, I like this one!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of three words. Here is my attempt.
hey susie, Ty.
ReplyDeleteben ...hey there. TY~
ReplyDeletechicca - hola y Ty!
ReplyDeletelaurie - how are you? TY.
ReplyDelete......
alice - TY!
Ha. This is the second I have read with these words. Opposed. They are opposed. How wonderful that we can take three words and create opposite worlds. This was vivid and scantily clad ;)
ReplyDeletehey WW. yep, words call up all sorts of
ReplyDeletedifferent ideas/poetry in different people. Ty
Like this very much, It's meanings are deep
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Ty, for going deep Cassiopeia.
ReplyDelete... Melanie
ReplyDeletegreat poem
ReplyDeletehey Sheila Ty -
ReplyDeleteVery nice, quite sexy!
ReplyDeletehey unsung poet, huge Ty.
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