Wednesday, December 14, 2011

soft tanka

he lay there immobile
her lips sought retribution
across his tingling flesh,
was it the warmth of her tongue,
or the proximity of her kisses
to his heart?

S.

3WW
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17 comments:

  1. Ben DittyDecember 14, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    You're so good at this love thing ;)

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  2. ShaunaDecember 14, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Ty, Ben. It's kind of embarrassing everyone else
    is writing Christmas poems - I do enjoy Christmas.

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  3. DaydreamertooDecember 14, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    Awww... very romantic. I'm not writing Christmas poems :) (Might though if the feeling comes to me) LOL

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  4. Ramesh SoodDecember 14, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    Both, maybe.. good one..

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  5. Lady In ReadDecember 14, 2011 at 11:03 PM

    in the pages of a romance novel! very nice..

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  6. ShaunaDecember 15, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    hey Dreamer2, Ty. yep. I'll just read the many
    holiday poems.

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  7. ShaunaDecember 15, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    Ty, Ramesh

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  8. ShaunaDecember 15, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    Dear Lady in Red, TY. please return.

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  9. Sheilagh LeeDecember 15, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    you write so sensually.

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  10. Sheilagh LeeDecember 15, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    beautiful prose

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  11. ShaunaDecember 16, 2011 at 8:29 AM

    TY, Sheilagh, so beautiful of you to say.

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  12. CynthiaDecember 16, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Gosh, Shauna, you paint such erotic visuals.
    Now, how will I ever get to sleep?

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  13. Michelle My BellDecember 21, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    simply lovely~ Thanks for visiting my blog :)

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  14. LoulouDecember 23, 2011 at 12:35 AM

    shauna, so sry for being such a bad blogger too much was going on.
    i wish you the best ever christsmas and everything your dream of for 2012

    Love you

    L.

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  15. ShaunaDecember 28, 2011 at 5:25 PM

    hey Cynthia, ty

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  16. ShaunaDecember 28, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    sure thing, my bell.

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  17. ShaunaDecember 28, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    hey lou lou, xo.

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