Wednesday, December 14, 2011

soft tanka

he lay there immobile
her lips sought retribution
across his tingling flesh,
was it the warmth of her tongue,
or the proximity of her kisses
to his heart?

S.

3WW

17 comments:

  1. You're so good at this love thing ;)

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  2. Ty, Ben. It's kind of embarrassing everyone else
    is writing Christmas poems - I do enjoy Christmas.

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  3. Awww... very romantic. I'm not writing Christmas poems :) (Might though if the feeling comes to me) LOL

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  4. in the pages of a romance novel! very nice..

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  5. hey Dreamer2, Ty. yep. I'll just read the many
    holiday poems.

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  6. Dear Lady in Red, TY. please return.

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  7. TY, Sheilagh, so beautiful of you to say.

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  8. Gosh, Shauna, you paint such erotic visuals.
    Now, how will I ever get to sleep?

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  9. simply lovely~ Thanks for visiting my blog :)

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  10. shauna, so sry for being such a bad blogger too much was going on.
    i wish you the best ever christsmas and everything your dream of for 2012

    Love you

    L.

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