sad that you can't trust again
not me dear, the narrator of the poem.
"Brutal sonnets" really intrigues me... very thought-provoking.
hey laurie, hmmm...I think I'll write a few.
I hope love wins the day and is trusted once again. There is no finer feeling than being truly free to love.
Nice Haiku like poem. Cheers.
Glad to have you back, Shauna :) Missed your saucy words.
free to love - I like the sound of that Daydreamer.
hey there Ben, TY.
i like this very much....thanks for sharing Shauna
and Ty, Wayne
Love requires that we take risks. I hope you will find enough trust in yourself to risk again.
hey Mary, yep we have to take risks in life - this poemis not about me - sometimes a poem is just a poem, not areflection of the poet's life. TY.
If the heart is flesh..should we trust it or not..I think maybe as 'rebels' we know..Jae ;)
jaerose, we can trust the heart to be who she is,a part of us who will be ruled by her emotions...Xo
Hi Shauna, love "sullen" desires; sometimes my desiresare rather sullen.
Re: Yes, I was almost get crazy myself!! xD I think that I'll drawing the missing pieces!!By the way, beautiful words!
Words so carefully chosen and placed together; this couldn't have been written any better. brutal sonnets awaken...just lovely. x
hey Cynthia, yep those persistent sullen desires.
Ty, Spell - lovin' the puzzles.
hey 'Sophia woW - TY
oh you said lots with few words..