Sunday, January 22, 2012

tip-toe

quiet as snow fall
each drop melts on a slim limb
tip-toe into love

S.

h.h.http://www.haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

10 comments:

  1. This is definitely one of the best haiku I've ever read :-)

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  2. This made me stop and think.....
    WOW!
    Very romantic in the deep of Winter....
    The cold of Winter
    The warmth of love
    That melts away the snow.
    Wonderful
    Blessings

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  3. Ben, thank you, you such a doll.

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  4. Bethe, dear, you're comment is a poem. TY

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  5. This evokes deeply physical sense memories. The chill that your moist body catches after a hot sweat. I love it.

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  6. your comment Cammila is quite appeals to
    the senses. Ty.

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  7. Almost painfully poignant, like fresh teardrops of joy.

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  8. Beautiful haiku, Shauna! Loved the last line ~ very creative! Thanks so much for visiting my blog and leaving me a comment :-)

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