Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Desire

He prefers her left side where the
fragile thread of a long-ago scar
grips his desire.


Shauna


3WW

15 comments:

  1. Tight, provocative, sensuous.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/15/blessed-connection/

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  2. Dear Rose and Kim your enthusiasm
    feels gret.

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  3. I wish I could get as much across - in 17 words. Well done!

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  4. Dear Rose, I love you for your continued support.

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  5. Dear Darkness; Sensuality awakens the senses and seems
    to birth my creativity

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  6. I'm sure you can O. Altonian, it's just
    a matter of passionat editing.

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  7. what a perfect use of the words. just loved it. beautiful poem.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/06/19/grip-for-3ww/

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  8. Gosh, I love these words. They convey a sense of longing, nostalgia and love with such simplicity and poignancy.
    Do keep writing. This is brilliant. :)

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  9. Hey Nitisha, cool name Ms. Pande.
    I appreciate your fine commentds.

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  10. perfect with only a few words, smiles.

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