Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Desire

He prefers her left side where the
fragile thread of a long-ago scar
grips his desire.


Shauna


3WW
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15 comments:

  1. RoseJune 15, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    Short and brilliant!

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  2. UnknownJune 15, 2011 at 12:58 PM

    Tight, provocative, sensuous.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/15/blessed-connection/

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  3. ShaunaJune 15, 2011 at 4:03 PM

    Dear Rose and Kim your enthusiasm
    feels gret.

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  4. Sheilagh LeeJune 15, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    sounds like a great guy.This is avery sensual poem.

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  5. AltonianJune 16, 2011 at 1:11 AM

    I wish I could get as much across - in 17 words. Well done!

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  6. ShaunaJune 17, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    Dear Rose, I love you for your continued support.

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  7. ShaunaJune 17, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    Dear Darkness; Sensuality awakens the senses and seems
    to birth my creativity

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  8. ShaunaJune 17, 2011 at 9:28 AM

    I'm sure you can O. Altonian, it's just
    a matter of passionat editing.

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  9. trishaJune 19, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    what a perfect use of the words. just loved it. beautiful poem.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/06/19/grip-for-3ww/

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  10. ShaunaJune 19, 2011 at 5:32 PM

    Dear Trish, thanks.

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  11. NitishaJuly 1, 2011 at 5:58 AM

    Gosh, I love these words. They convey a sense of longing, nostalgia and love with such simplicity and poignancy.
    Do keep writing. This is brilliant. :)

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  12. ShaunaJuly 7, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    Hey Nitisha, cool name Ms. Pande.
    I appreciate your fine commentds.

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  13. UnknownJuly 8, 2011 at 8:14 PM

    perfect with only a few words, smiles.

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  14. UnknownJuly 8, 2011 at 8:14 PM

    Hello: Happy Weekend!

    Write anything coming to your mind based on the image we provide for week 5,
    Share with us.

    Bless you,
    Hope to read your entry.
    Cheers.
    xoxox

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  15. ShaunaJuly 16, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    goo-to-know, bluebell.

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