The rhythm
of my body
has become altered
{tres graceful} by this
Lover's need for my
scent and fondness for
the softness
of my skin after our
intense love-making.
At last Lover's trembling
manifests as a tranquil
lake, placid beneath
my over flowing peace.
3WW
Yes, that's beautiful alright, and erotic.
ReplyDeleteMmmm...after glow. A beautiful and sensuous poem that evokes a feelings of deep contentment and satisfaction
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful
ReplyDeleteSexy and beautify.
ReplyDeleteVery kool use of the words and your skill. As u adveertise, erotic poetry at its best. Superb.
ReplyDeleteAltonian: so wonderfully pleased by your words.
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MLM: ahhh.... most defintely, Mind.
Dear Darkness - luv your generousity.
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Thom, mucho thanks.
Dear Henry, I'm thrilled with your critique.
ReplyDeleteSimple and true, as if you've unclothed the essence. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI try Peter, transparency is a turn on.
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