Thursday, June 9, 2011

After All

The rhythm
of my body
has become altered
{tres graceful} by this
Lover's need for my
scent and fondness for
the softness
of my skin after our
intense love-making.
At last Lover's trembling
manifests as a tranquil
lake, placid beneath
my over flowing peace.

3WW

10 comments:

  1. Yes, that's beautiful alright, and erotic.

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  2. Mmmm...after glow. A beautiful and sensuous poem that evokes a feelings of deep contentment and satisfaction

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  3. Very kool use of the words and your skill. As u adveertise, erotic poetry at its best. Superb.

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  4. Altonian: so wonderfully pleased by your words.

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    MLM: ahhh.... most defintely, Mind.

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  5. Dear Darkness - luv your generousity.

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    Thom, mucho thanks.

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  6. Dear Henry, I'm thrilled with your critique.

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  7. Simple and true, as if you've unclothed the essence. Nice.

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  8. I try Peter, transparency is a turn on.

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