I like the subtlety of the title..like her flesh..her body is in good (safe) hands..Jae
Sensual and stunningly delivered.
jaerose -Ty. happy you view this poemin a positive light... I do.
scribbler - tY. wow.
oh such passion in this poem.
Definitely my kind of fantasies. Gorgeous!
sheilagh, passion is my positive fuel,after chocolate, of course.
that so works for me, laurie.
uh huh...so deliciously over-whelming, Y.
SHORT but OH SO POWERFUL & sweet!!JYES!!!Kimberly
hey sexy BANG. your comment is exciting.
Lucky you, lucky him.
Ooh ... wonderfully written!
you're hot, paige.
no doubt, old egg.
deborah: TY.sweet rose: Ty.
"...his fantasies become viable..." I just love how you've created indefinite possibilities with these words. This story is waiting to NEVER end! Rick
Thank you for commenting on my blog!your blog is so cool..http://kimonosnack.blogspot.com/
dear R. - Ty. you gave me wonderful compliment.
I enjoyed your blog also, Akiko - cool name.
short and powerful. i like how you used the word viable. brilliant!
Without the title, this could be worrisome. With the title, it is romantic, erotic, lovely.http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/
hey jen, I'm enjoying how the 3WW promptallows me to play with words - which is oneof my fave. things to do.
you're so right Kim. and naturally I want thispoem to be seen in a positive, erotic light.
there's so much passion in these four lines.. love it!
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