Wednesday, August 17, 2011

grace

I am mute
yet my heart gasps
as his fantasies become
viable on my pliant flesh...


shauna

3WW

29 comments:

  1. I like the subtlety of the title..like her flesh..her body is in good (safe) hands..Jae

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  2. Sensual and stunningly delivered.

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  3. jaerose -Ty. happy you view this poem
    in a positive light... I do.

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  4. Definitely my kind of fantasies. Gorgeous!

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  5. sheilagh, passion is my positive fuel,
    after chocolate, of course.

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  6. that so works for me, laurie.

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  7. uh huh...so deliciously over-whelming, Y.

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  8. SHORT but OH SO POWERFUL & sweet!!

    JYES!!!

    Kimberly

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  9. hey sexy BANG. your comment is exciting.

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  10. "...his fantasies become viable..."
    I just love how you've created indefinite possibilities with these words. This story is waiting to NEVER end!

    Rick

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  11. Thank you for commenting on my blog!
    your blog is so cool..

    http://kimonosnack.blogspot.com/

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  12. dear R. - Ty. you gave me wonderful compliment.

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  13. I enjoyed your blog also, Akiko - cool name.

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  14. short and powerful. i like how you used the word viable. brilliant!

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  15. Without the title, this could be worrisome. With the title, it is romantic, erotic, lovely.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/

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  16. hey jen, I'm enjoying how the 3WW prompt
    allows me to play with words - which is one
    of my fave. things to do.

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  17. you're so right Kim. and naturally I want this
    poem to be seen in a positive, erotic light.

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  18. there's so much passion in these four lines.. love it!

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    a fun interview - only three questions-
    please email me here:

    crinkleddresspress@yahoo.com

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