I like the subtlety of the title..like her flesh..her body is in good (safe) hands..Jae
Sensual and stunningly delivered.
jaerose -Ty. happy you view this poemin a positive light... I do.
scribbler - tY. wow.
oh such passion in this poem.
Sexy!
Definitely my kind of fantasies. Gorgeous!
sheilagh, passion is my positive fuel,after chocolate, of course.
that so works for me, laurie.
uh huh...so deliciously over-whelming, Y.
SHORT but OH SO POWERFUL & sweet!!JYES!!!Kimberly
hey sexy BANG. your comment is exciting.
Lucky you, lucky him.
hot.
Ooh ... wonderfully written!
Beautiful!
you're hot, paige.
no doubt, old egg.
deborah: TY.sweet rose: Ty.
"...his fantasies become viable..." I just love how you've created indefinite possibilities with these words. This story is waiting to NEVER end! Rick
Thank you for commenting on my blog!your blog is so cool..http://kimonosnack.blogspot.com/
dear R. - Ty. you gave me wonderful compliment.
I enjoyed your blog also, Akiko - cool name.
short and powerful. i like how you used the word viable. brilliant!
Without the title, this could be worrisome. With the title, it is romantic, erotic, lovely.http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/
hey jen, I'm enjoying how the 3WW promptallows me to play with words - which is oneof my fave. things to do.
you're so right Kim. and naturally I want thispoem to be seen in a positive, erotic light.
there's so much passion in these four lines.. love it!
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I like the subtlety of the title..like her flesh..her body is in good (safe) hands..Jae
ReplyDeleteSensual and stunningly delivered.
ReplyDeletejaerose -Ty. happy you view this poem
ReplyDeletein a positive light... I do.
scribbler - tY. wow.
ReplyDeleteoh such passion in this poem.
ReplyDeleteSexy!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely my kind of fantasies. Gorgeous!
ReplyDeletesheilagh, passion is my positive fuel,
ReplyDeleteafter chocolate, of course.
that so works for me, laurie.
ReplyDeleteuh huh...so deliciously over-whelming, Y.
ReplyDeleteSHORT but OH SO POWERFUL & sweet!!
ReplyDeleteJYES!!!
Kimberly
hey sexy BANG. your comment is exciting.
ReplyDeleteLucky you, lucky him.
ReplyDeletehot.
ReplyDeleteOoh ... wonderfully written!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteyou're hot, paige.
ReplyDeleteno doubt, old egg.
ReplyDeletedeborah: TY.
ReplyDeletesweet rose: Ty.
"...his fantasies become viable..."
ReplyDeleteI just love how you've created indefinite possibilities with these words. This story is waiting to NEVER end!
Rick
Thank you for commenting on my blog!
ReplyDeleteyour blog is so cool..
http://kimonosnack.blogspot.com/
dear R. - Ty. you gave me wonderful compliment.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your blog also, Akiko - cool name.
ReplyDeleteshort and powerful. i like how you used the word viable. brilliant!
ReplyDeleteWithout the title, this could be worrisome. With the title, it is romantic, erotic, lovely.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/
hey jen, I'm enjoying how the 3WW prompt
ReplyDeleteallows me to play with words - which is one
of my fave. things to do.
you're so right Kim. and naturally I want this
ReplyDeletepoem to be seen in a positive, erotic light.
there's so much passion in these four lines.. love it!
ReplyDeleteTy. Miss Dre - hope you will participate in
ReplyDeletea fun interview - only three questions-
please email me here:
crinkleddresspress@yahoo.com