seeps into my bones
peels off my hidden self
your soft words crystallize
that every thing in my life has brought
me to you
I levitate at the sound of your hello
melt like a lollipop when you say my name
each one of my cells opens - you stake your claim
my breath gushes out filled with your name
and I know all my life was for one thing only
to draw you closer to me
S.
S.
this poem was written in memory of someone I met on line and exchanged poetry with once a week and
ReplyDeletespoke on our cells every other day and fell in love with - So yeah, I believe love is blind.
Beautiful, so special when you think you've found the 'one'
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful! I love when the person yiou love speaks your name. you do melt.
ReplyDeleteAs always I just love reading your writing. It just opens up your senses.
Happy Thanksgiving to you Shauna!
Blessings
I've known the same feeling you mentioned in your comment Shauna. Really moving when you wrote "I levitate at the sound of your hello." Almost says it all.
ReplyDeleteDreamer2, Ty - sure is.
ReplyDeletehey sweetest Bethe - I know & certain voices simply mesmerize me.
ReplyDeletehey Ben-pie, such a feeling you feel like all the corny metaphors have come to life . TY
ReplyDeleteSuch a moving piece..the power of your voice seeps into my bones..peels of my hidden self...love comes in so many ways and when we least expect it..love is blind...
ReplyDeletevery passionate.
ReplyDeletethanks for your comments on my blog.
can you write music? would you like to write a song to my verse? if it works, i guess i could write more stanzas.
thanks for the comment on my blog. i love the title in this post, yeah love is blind ;D
ReplyDeletelots of strong imagery here
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem
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hey Zong, no I don't write music.
ReplyDeleteyep, Susie, love comes in so many ways - we must let go of pre-concieved notions. Ty
ReplyDeletehey mia - this title is older than you - Shakespeare's to be exact.
ReplyDeleteJessica, Ty. pls. return
ReplyDeletebuenos dias, Cindy, TY hon, pls. return.
ReplyDeleteyou write like a female version of nick cave's best poetry, and you know what his writing means to me
ReplyDelete*hearts*
Truly heart-rendingly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI was moved to tears :)
This gorgeously expressed feeling resonates with me so hard, I'm just about vibrating.
ReplyDeletehey loulou TY for the insane compliment - this
ReplyDeletepiece came to me in a dream & the music was sick
I just can't recreate it - I need a xylophone to
keep near my bed.
oOo...Cammila... well strap yourself in babe,
ReplyDelete'cause more is on its way. Ty.
Ygraine,she of the beautiful name. O.lo siento Ty
ReplyDeleteWOW!!! Such a blessed gift you have with words...
ReplyDeleteYour words are like honey, sweet and delicious!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful! Love your blog!
ReplyDeletehey Michelle - tyluvyouty
ReplyDeleteMariann, honey well dip & enjoy.
ReplyDelete& I loved your blog as well, High Heels.
ReplyDeleteDelightful! Thanks so much for contributing to Carry On Tuesday.
ReplyDeleteTY, Keith.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful as you write from the heart and soul!
ReplyDeleteTy sweet Rose
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