Thursday, February 23, 2012

dear you ~

my brain can no longer labor
through all your elastic lies
this relationship is cancelled.

S.

3WW

14 comments:

  1. "elastic lies" love that...short and too the point... :)

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  2. Awe, I hope one really didn't end for you!

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  3. hey susie, Ty - kind of like that one myself.

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  4. hey there ben, nope this is just made up TY

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  5. I love this resolve..neat and crisp..a decision well made..I wonder who the 'you' is..for me it would be that nagging inner j but that's just me! Succinctly written (unlike my comment..)..Jae ;)

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  6. elastic lies - two words that haunt

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  7. jae, keep that nagging inner j. quiet. love your poetry.

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  8. jennifer, yep. i like that team of words.

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  9. Rebecca, great to see you, sorry I missed your reply.
    Well, in real time, it's never easy. Ty

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