She seduces me down
the rabbit hole
only her legs are visible
she's quiet as a star
when little we pretended
to be asleep.
breathing on her lake,
she stirs
I write fairy tales across
her dreams
always ending with ~
and then she was mine.
S.
OSI
Lovely and innocent.
ReplyDeleteThe beauty of innocence in this one...
ReplyDeletehey Cynthia, TY.
ReplyDeletehey Susie, TY for the pop-in.
ReplyDeleteRomantic and sensuous. Love the line "I write fairy tales across
ReplyDeleteher dreams". Thanks for dropping by my blog.
What a romantic poem. So stirring! Enjoyed the read.
ReplyDeletehey Karen, ty. I appreciate your comments.
ReplyDeletehey Write Girl, great to know you enjoyed thisTY
ReplyDeleteI've never been seduced down a rabbit hole, but I'm willing to be!
ReplyDeleteUnderground Streams
Oh Shauna, do I detect a note of sweet, tender sentimentality? ;) Please say yes, because I'd be pretty embarrassed if I misread your work so thoroughly as to put a lump in my throat.
ReplyDeleteYour words never fail to take me away!
ReplyDeleteMr. Magical Mystical - I know you would enjoy the experience. ;]
ReplyDeleteYes, Cammila, you certainly do. Who can forget their first bestie from childhood? A sweet
ReplyDeletegirl with a passion for games.
Hi Ben, and that is my goal, babe.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend.
Awww... a lovely memory.
ReplyDeleteAs quiet as a star this post has been waiting..and I am glad I found it..you made me smile..just before nodding off down the rabbit hole of dreams..Jae
ReplyDeleteHey dreamgirl - TY
ReplyDeletedarling jae, if I made you smile this poem
ReplyDeleteis so worth it, 'cause you smiling makes
me smile - TY - hugs.