Friday, March 2, 2012

underground fairy tales

She seduces me down
the rabbit hole
only her legs are visible
she's quiet as a star
when little we pretended
to be asleep.

 breathing on her lake,
she stirs
I write fairy tales across
her dreams
always ending with ~
and then she was mine.

S.

OSI

18 comments:

  1. The beauty of innocence in this one...

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  2. hey Susie, TY for the pop-in.

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  3. Romantic and sensuous. Love the line "I write fairy tales across
    her dreams". Thanks for dropping by my blog.

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  4. What a romantic poem. So stirring! Enjoyed the read.

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  5. hey Karen, ty. I appreciate your comments.

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  6. hey Write Girl, great to know you enjoyed thisTY

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  7. I've never been seduced down a rabbit hole, but I'm willing to be!



    Underground Streams

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  8. Oh Shauna, do I detect a note of sweet, tender sentimentality? ;) Please say yes, because I'd be pretty embarrassed if I misread your work so thoroughly as to put a lump in my throat.

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  9. Your words never fail to take me away!

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  10. Mr. Magical Mystical - I know you would enjoy the experience. ;]

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  11. Yes, Cammila, you certainly do. Who can forget their first bestie from childhood? A sweet
    girl with a passion for games.

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  12. Hi Ben, and that is my goal, babe.
    Have a great weekend.

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  13. As quiet as a star this post has been waiting..and I am glad I found it..you made me smile..just before nodding off down the rabbit hole of dreams..Jae

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  14. darling jae, if I made you smile this poem
    is so worth it, 'cause you smiling makes
    me smile - TY - hugs.

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