Friday, February 3, 2012

river me ...

the silhouette
detaches
                     a surge of honey
licks me into
a river
then

the jolt of cool  lips

flay.

S.
3WW

12 comments:

  1. "licks me into a river" = brilliant! Are you this saucy in day to day life?

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  2. The lines are like the flow and ebb of water..river me..what an idea..warmed me up on this icy morning..Jae ;)

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  3. I like that sound of that, Audrey

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  4. O. you noticed the river effect , Ty, Jae.
    stay warm honey.

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