What an interesting poem. I like the simplicity yet you convey so much. I imagine the girl is also shattered like the lightbulb.
Oh, poor she!
the poor girl looked like broken glass. TY, write girl.
I know. Ty Harshad.
If it's the right girl, anywhere will do.
well crafted juxtapositionmuch love...
simple and oh so clear... spacious and perhaps lonely too.
This is seriously, beautifully broken. I love it.
And she did look lonely, Laura.
Ron, you just don't know how close yourcomment is to how this young girl looked.
Short but very vivid and packs a punch. Thanks for the visit you paid my blog and for leaving a comment!