What an interesting poem. I like the simplicity yet you convey so much. I imagine the girl is also shattered like the lightbulb.
Oh, poor she!
original ...!
the poor girl looked like broken glass. TY, write girl.
I know. Ty Harshad.
Sandra.
If it's the right girl, anywhere will do.
well crafted juxtapositionmuch love...
hey j.
TY, Gillena
simple and oh so clear... spacious and perhaps lonely too.
This is seriously, beautifully broken. I love it.
And she did look lonely, Laura.
Ron, you just don't know how close yourcomment is to how this young girl looked.
Short but very vivid and packs a punch. Thanks for the visit you paid my blog and for leaving a comment!
Hey, Laura.
What an interesting poem. I like the simplicity yet you convey so much. I imagine the girl is also shattered like the lightbulb.
ReplyDeleteOh, poor she!
ReplyDeleteoriginal ...!
ReplyDeletethe poor girl looked like broken glass. TY, write girl.
ReplyDeleteI know. Ty Harshad.
ReplyDeleteSandra.
ReplyDeleteIf it's the right girl, anywhere will do.
ReplyDeletewell crafted juxtaposition
ReplyDeletemuch love...
hey j.
ReplyDeleteTY, Gillena
ReplyDeletesimple and oh so clear... spacious and perhaps lonely too.
ReplyDeleteThis is seriously, beautifully broken. I love it.
ReplyDeleteAnd she did look lonely, Laura.
ReplyDeleteRon, you just don't know how close your
ReplyDeletecomment is to how this young girl looked.
Short but very vivid and packs a punch. Thanks for the visit you paid my blog and for leaving a comment!
ReplyDeleteHey, Laura.
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