Sunday, September 30, 2012

All the absent people ...


Kmart Cafe
shattered lightbulb
and girl.



16 comments:

  1. What an interesting poem. I like the simplicity yet you convey so much. I imagine the girl is also shattered like the lightbulb.

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  2. the poor girl looked like broken glass. TY, write girl.

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  3. If it's the right girl, anywhere will do.

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  4. well crafted juxtaposition


    much love...

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  5. simple and oh so clear... spacious and perhaps lonely too.

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  6. This is seriously, beautifully broken. I love it.

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  7. And she did look lonely, Laura.

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  8. Ron, you just don't know how close your
    comment is to how this young girl looked.

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  9. Short but very vivid and packs a punch. Thanks for the visit you paid my blog and for leaving a comment!

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